Feedback on preliminary task

Preliminary Task Mark Sheet: Demi Anderson

General comments	Front Cover:  Well done – you appear to understand all of the conventions of front cover design. Your images are appropriate for the publication and target audience. You appear to understand the need for a variety of font size and style. Your sell lines are also appropriate for both your target audience and your publication. Contents Page: I absolutely love your contents page; It is really neat and tidy and would be easy for the audience to navigate. The organisation of your articles and page numbers is superb and your images and sell lines are perfectly appropriate for your target audience. Well Done!!!!
Areas for improvement	Front Cover:  Your font could maybe do with standing out a little more as the more vibrant the font the better for your readers, especially when you are dealing with such a young target audience. Contents Page: As I said absolutely love your contents page; - you maybe could have experimented with anther colour to add a bit of variety in colour.
Overall grade	B
How I will improve	I will improve by changing my font style and  color in my actual magazine so that it stands out more. To further improve, I may also change the color scheme so that it is also more vibrant and is likely to work better for a younger audience.